As has probably been evident by my latest blog posts, I’ve been especially inspired to catalog the swarm of ideas for other books in my series that have been coming to me lately. To be honest, that meant putting editing the first book on the back burner for a bit. However, I really think I needed the distraction at the time. I had a lot of words left to sift through (over 100K). New ideas give me a solid reason to push through the rest of my manuscript.
It’s not that I’m not enthused about the words I’ve written; I’ve just been looking at them for a really, really long time. I want to move on. Though, to do this, I realized I needed to make some big decisions about the future of my series. Now that a lot of those decisions have been made, I feel less vague about where the series is going. (Book V is still something of a blank slate in my mind, despite knowing what key events I’d like to have in it. I’m just not sure how I want to swing the blurb yet. Need to explore more details from the prior books first.)
Lately, I’ve seriously gotten back into the editing of Book I, The Elementalist: Rise of Hara. Each time I read back through my story, I find myself double-checking some assumptions I’ve made about my understanding of certain things it shares with our world. For example, a knife versus a dagger. One of my characters carries one, another the opposite weapon. It’s always been this way in my mind—probably an aesthetic choice, when I first created their characters—but I never really stopped to ask myself “why?” for practical reasons. Naturally, that required some research and deliberation on my part. (In the end, it turned out not to be a big deal. Still, it’s just one of those things you take for granted, I think, without actively realizing it.)
Anyway, I’m looking to get through a few more scenes this morning before I chill with the parents for Easter—which I don’t actually celebrate, but they do, so… In any case, it’s nice to be making progress again.
I was researching a technical point in my novel (for verisimilitude’s sake), realizing I was making some assumptions about technology during the 1930s and ’40s that I actually hadn’t researched–like whether or not airships had any hydraulic systems in place (a minor plot point in my WIP). Anyhow, I came across a comment by a man named “Stu” on an article at airships.net about the Hindenburg, and I thought it was very interesting. He was responding to another reader’s questions about airship rudders and elevators.
‘K, am I the only one wiggin’ out about how completely awesomethe new Avatar show has been so far? The battles are epic, the foes are worthy, and the (element) bending…
The music is also gooooooorgeous. And epic. And as much as I love it, I also secretly envy it because it has most of the traits I want my WIP to have.
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When I’m watching & listening to the soundtrack for “The Legend of Korra” (LoK) TV series, I can’t help but think of Element 7. It shares similar themes with LoK and, now that the show is mostly set in a 1920s/30s Shanghai-kinda city, also a few similar aesthetics here and there. Seeing this show done so well actually makes me feel bad about neglecting my own work–because ultimately I want to see it also at its absolute best and for others to see it, too.
I want it to be epic, I want it to be lovelyand, most of all, I want it to be darn good.
Not that it means it’ll sell to traditional publishers even if it were all of these things…but it’s what I’ve always aspired to. And sometimes that can be overwhelming.
Back On The Saddle…Sorta
After the Accident, I wasn’t doing any editing for about two weeks. Though, over the past few days I have been able to get something done, so I guess it’s a start. I need to do it every day, though, to get it done this summer (before my birthday in mid-August would be nice). Recently I came up against another tricky scene in which I was unsure how to describe certain technology being used, so I had to go back and do some research–which slows things down.
You see, sometimes I seriously wonder how I’ll pull off certain scenes, lol. I get like, “AH! OMG, too hard!” *runs-n-hides* I hadn’t run into a scene like that for a while… Anyway, I think I’ve smoothed over that hitch now, so hopefully it’ll be easier to find a regular rhythm (and some confidence in what I’m doing) again.
Though actually, when I look back at what I have spiffed up, I’m really happy with about 90-ish percent of it–like giddily happy. It’s just getting the rest of the manuscript to that point that’s so gosh-darn difficult.
One good thing I can say about working on a story for this long, though, is that it allows you to think about it over time in many different ways…in layers. All the dead time in between is an opportunity to see something you wouldn’t have otherwise, to make connections you previously overlooked and weave a tighter, more resonant and cohesive narrative… In other words, it allows you to really flesh things out and explore things deeply.
I’m a pretty meditative, analytical kind of person, so I like being able to do this. Though, I’m also a bit of a perfectionist–which could end up being my Achilles’ heel if I don’t finish this thing at all.
Anyways…hopefully–if I get my act together, lol–I’ll be able to share this beast-of-a story with my first readers in a couple of months and they’ll understand exactly what I’ve been up to all this time.
*sighs* Yeah…that would be nice.
In the meantime, I’ll stop talking about it, heh.
So What Do You All Think?
Go ahead, be brutal. After all, I probably don’t know where you live. 😉
I got an email this morning telling me, “Hey, we can’t award your diploma yet because you haven’t met the requirements–surprise!”
WTH are you people talking about??? I went over my req’s forwards and backwards with my advisor and you have my transcripts, so what’s the deal?
I think this may be another case of “we changed the course req’s again at the last minute without telling you,” which has happened before. And the fact that I’ve been enrolled in three different colleges/universities and have transfer credits out the wazoo doesn’t help; it only complicates things. My usual advisor is out-of-town, so I had to talk to a general advisor. Hopefully she can tell what’s what and we can get this ironed out.
Way to start off the day: stressed and mildly depressed.
But I’m not going to sully this blogging experience anymore. I do have something that’s potentially useful to some that I can share today.
Life in the Early 1900s
I was editing this scene yesterday where my protagonist is having a phone conversation, and I realized that I was making some general assumptions about the way telephones worked in the late 1930s, which is the era I’m deriving a lot of my worldbuilding inspiration from (both American and European). I just wanted to double-check myself (and ended up spending way more time than I needed to looking into 1930s telephones in general).
Anyhow, I came across a really neat site called 1900s.org.uk where a woman by the name of Pat Cryer shares her mother’s recollections of life in London during the early 1900s. She mentions so many little details that I feel just really bring that city to life while reading about it on the page. I was quite ecstatic when I discovered this, haha, because I’ve never been able to find this kind of information before. Additionally, I found another site with vintage clips and footage called archive.org.
Since I’m a very curious little monkey and just couldn’t resist, I wanted to compare this to life in America, as well, so I got a book called (and it’s a long title): Daily Life in the United States, 1920-1940: How Americans Lived Through the Roaring Twenties and the Great Depression. Anyway, I just bought it yesterday with my free two-day shipping through Amazon, so it should be here by tomorrow. (Yeah, I could have it now if I were an e-book reader, though I’ve discovered there are certain things I just must have–with actual physical pages. I like to highlight and underline and make copies and notes or whatever, basically just use my hands and have a direct connection to whatever I’m engaging in. It just isn’t the same on the computer, for some reason. I guess it’s just a tactile/kinesthetic learning thing–which makes sitting down for hours on end to write/edit a novel kind of challenging for me, actually.)
That’s the thing about doing research: there are different levels you can go into. Some things I’ve researched more than others in my story, and others I kind of take what I need/want and just say “what the hey!” to the rest. I guess at the end of the day it simply comes down to whether I’m satisfied with what I’ve written. If I see a way to improve something, I’m going to improve it or else it’ll bug me till Kingdom come. (Though, admittedly, seeing room for improvement and nitpicking are two different things…)
So yes, maybe this is all a bit OC of me, considering I’m writing secondary world fantasy, but I do care about whether there were dial and ring tones on telephones in the late 1930s and whether speaking to an operator was always necessary to place a call. (And maybe that kind of thinking is why I’ll never finish this book!)
J/K. I will. I’m going to. You’ll see.
[Quick update: I just got a call from the advisor, and they totally just fixed my problem–yay! Diploma’s on the way, at last.]
So anyway, I wonder what you folks have been up to recently?
Making headway on your projects? Encountering any speed bumps? And bonus, if you’re bold enough: do you think I am maybe just a little bit crazy? (Or normal–for a writer, anyway. I’ll take that, too.)
Yesterday I got pretty distracted, to be honest, so today I plan to do better. (If there’s one downside to having to type up and edit your manuscript on a laptop with Wi-Fi access, it’s that the Internet is always riiiiiight by your side… But oh! Aren’t the discoveries wonderful? ;))
P.S.: the random patch of light grey text at the beginning is…yeah, not intentional.
I don’t know why I’m just now discovering this, but I came across this website today called Real Military Videos and it’s got some really interesting content! They have some vintage OSS instructional videos–very relevant to my fiction.
I know I can’t research every little detail in my (fantasy) novel and I don’t get a whole lot into the more involved aspects that comes with real espionage–tradecraft, namely; I’m taking a pretty fanciful approach, to be honest…but I really can’t believe I’d never thought to look up “OSS agent training” before.
Well, I’m sure to pick up some good stuff now, at least, and am likely to find some information that could help me take some of my ideas to the next level, you know? It’s not too late, as I’m still in the first editing stages and haven’t made any extensive changes to the manuscript just yet, aside from my first chapter. So long as I don’t spend ages dabbling in this stuff, heh (big temptation there).
What is the OSS?
Well, before there was the CIA there was something called the Office of Strategic Services, or the OSS. It came about during WWII and didn’t last very long, from 1942 to 1945, and is known as “America’s first intelligence agency.” (The CIA was subsequently formed in 1947.) You can read more about it here, if you’re interested.
Here’s a link to the first of the instructional videos I was talking about before. It’s pretty neat to be able to go back in time via cinematography!
Anyways, you never know who else might be interested in this stuff, so I thought I’d just share.