It’s hard to believe another year has gone by, but it has—and much to my surprise, I’ve pretty much achieved my goals. (This is only surprising to me because usually, I don’t set any goals.)
Last year, I set out to achieve three things: (1) finish editing Book I of my fantasy series, (2) begin planning and writing Book II of said fantasy series, and (3) plan the end of a long-distance relationship I was involved in. (Notice how I used the past tense.)
#1 I’ve done; I’m still not “finished”, per se, but I’m “done” for now. I’ve sent the thing out to beta readers and am currently still getting some feedback to consider. So far so good. (Thought maybe I could be done with the whole beta reader process and edits based on that before now, but that was a joke. Still, I consider this goal “accomplished”.)
#2 I can also check off the list. Barely started actually writing the story just a few days ago so squeaked that one in. (My progress bar on the side of my website now reflects this.) One particular scene was in my head and I just wanted to get it down on paper. Since I’m still waiting on feedback for the first novel, I thought this would be a good time to get the second one going.
As for #3, well, things just didn’t work out with me and the ex-boyfriend. I think we were in very different places in our lives, and our lifestyles were way too different to really coincide. He was a lot more footloose and bohemian than me. Traveled light…that kind of thing. (And here I am collecting vintage furniture I don’t necessarily need.) There’s a certain appeal to that, but if you’re talking about possibly spending the rest of your life together and moving to another state…well, I’ll let you fill in the blanks.
There was also the issue of him changing his tune from “I can see us getting married” and nonchalantly asking me about ring styles to “I’m not sure I want to get married/believe in marriage anymore,” which is enough in and of itself if you ask me. #dealbreaker
That all happened back in February, in addition to having to put down my two very sickly cats of 17 years, and I’ve pretty much been single ever since. Actually, I think I’m a lot happier being single. Looking back on my dating escapades, I think I’ve always been happier single. Doesn’t mean I don’t get curious about men every now and then; I like men. (Well, some of them.) I’m just not sure I ought to be living with one. See, I happen to be responsible with my money, I live a pretty stable life, and I still believe that marriage can be a good thing. Unfortunately, none of those things seem to be en vogue with the guys I run into nowadays. (Because in my past lives, apparently, things were different. </sarcasm>)
I could really go on about this if I’m not careful, but that’s not why I started this post; I’m setting some new goals for the New Year, people. Three of them, to be exact—two that are writing-related and one that’s more personal. After all, that’s what I did last year, so y’know, let’s not get too creative.
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Today is the day Tiyana explains how she actually sat down and thought about the future of her fantasy series…
…after 10 years of working on the first novel, heh.
I’m amazed at how much my brain can come up with simply by listening to music. (A lot of this I actually talked about in the “goals” portion of my last blog post, so this may be a little redundant for blog readers. However, if you like videos more than text, then voilà!)
How do you plan for a novel series?
If you’re working on one, that is. 🙂 (Or have worked on in the past.)
Last weekend, I released a new YouTube video discussing the idea of channeling your own emotions, using them as writing prompts to tackle dark themes in your stories, and how this can result in more complex characters. I also reference some of my personal life experiences and explain how they manifest in my writing as an example.
I really believe that if you’re going to play with any particular theme in a story—be it light or dark—then it’s important to come from a personal place when doing so. Otherwise, you run the risk of writing a story that does not emotionally resonate with readers in an authentic way and instead comes across more like a dry essay or intellectual exercise in flexing your technical literary muscles.
At least, this has been my experience while wrestling with my WIP and reading other people’s writing.
For more Internet articles related to writing dark themes, check out these links below:
Some of you probably already know that I’m a pantser; in other words, I don’t really like to plan my writing!
Well, I take that back.
I do like having a little bit of a plan, but it’s so sparse that most probably wouldn’t even consider it “a plan.” It’s more like this: “I want [insert big event] to happen in [insert cool locale], where the characters then find/achieve [insert objective]!” Then I just figure out the rest from there. And I think this only has a chance at working because my WIP is a quest or adventure series; it’s “mission-driven fiction,” essentially.
Not plot-driven, exactly, ’cause I still focus on characters along the way, but in terms of planning I think of the story in terms of missions…if that makes sense.
So yeah. That seriously has been my plan for an Element 7 series, in a nutshell. (“What? A series, you say?” Yes, dear readers, you read that right. I should have probably already mentioned that on my E7 page…heh.)
Planning A Series
So I’ve read only a little about how authors like J. K. Rowling went about their work. Apparently, she took around five years to plan the Harry Potter series before writing it, though I can’t recall reading the specifics about how she did this. (It’s probably out there; I just haven’t really looked it up,.) But honestly, there isn’t really a lot of advice out there for folks who do want to write a trilogy or series (not in comparison to other writing topics, anyways). Most times, it seems writers are actually discouraged from doing so–at least when they are working on their first novel.
Apparently, it’s too “cliché,” when you’re writing fantasy…
As for me, “planning” a series has kinda just naturally been happening while working on this first novel—like I’ll be in the middle of a scene and think to myself, “Hey, that would make for a totally cool thing to explore in Book II/III!” And then I just plant the seeds, make a note to water them later and roll with it. (I’ve actually got probably half of Book II planned out by specific scenes I’ve already written or summarized in my journals, with a few ideas for the other half and Book III still subconsciously cooking in my messed-up head.)
But really, all I’m doing is using that basic formula I mentioned at the beginning for each subsequent book and designing each end objective so that they tie into one another, leading to the final objective in the last novel, while also figuring out the interconnecting threads (or those “ah-ha!” moments) along the way.
I bet some people wonder why it would possibly take 5+ years to plan out a bunch of books, but now I’m pretty sure I understand why…
There Are Just SO Many Little Details That Have Got to Work Together!
Especially when you’re writing secondary world fantasy. Every piece of invented information that’s in that bad-boy-of-a-series is coming from your brain. It’s like this giant sprawling 200,000-piece puzzle of your own personal design; everything’s gotta fit together. And when you do sit down to try and put this puzzle together, it typically doesn’t happen overnight. Plus, you gotta handcraft all those pieces before that can even happen–nope, none of that computer-aided/die cut business. So you can’t just toss in stuff willy-nilly because you think it’s oh-so-cool (learned that the long, hard way); everything has to have a reason for being in the novels or else you have to work backwards and find a gorram reason for all the dangling stuff to matter.
Harder to do, imo, but doable.
When I first started learning how to write a novel, my mind just couldn’t even begin to grasp this concept. “Whaddya mean I can’t just throw in what I want and expect it to work? Bah! Watch me…” And y’know how that turned out…
Lots and lots of experimental drafts that went nowhere.
But that’s okay! ’cause I eventually figured out how to make all that cool stuff I originally wanted to shoehorn into the same story actually work together—haha! (Or at least I think I have…) Plus, I learned oodles, like…
The Importance of Foreshadowing
…which, I think, is extremely important when you’re planning and writing a trilogy. Foreshadowed details provide rhythm and continuity. They’re like the threads that bind the novels in a series together–along with recurring themes, characters, settings and/or ideas, which all help to create a sense of unity and cohesiveness. (Sorry, I’m using those pesky Principles of Art/Design again…but you’ll find them everywhere that good art or designs reside. Writers and literary critics just tend to use different terminology for them, I think.)
You know how excited you get when you pick up Part II of a book, game or movie series and learn that some of your favorite characters are back? Or the telltale hint—or sometimes outright slap—of a promise that “hey, there’s more yet to come”? For me, that’s part of the excitement of reading/watching/playing a series; it’s also one of the reasons I want to write one. (That, and getting to my favorite “candy bar scenes.”)
…Because I just love the characters that darn much. And the world. They’re just people and places that I’d like to come back to again.
Trust me, if I didn’t love them, I wouldn’t still be working on this project, haha. (5.75 years is a looooong tiiiiime to be attached to the hip with the same ideas…)
For more posts like this, check out my “series” tag!
So how do you plan for a trilogy/series?
Or maybe you’ve never worked on one before; that’s cool. You’ve probably read at least one, though, right? What kind of things do you like about series? What do you wish authors who write series did a better job of?
I know one of the reasons I started writing was because of my own “fantasy novel pet peeves”; I thought hey, why do writers keep doing this and that? Let’s write a story that does it differently!
Dang–I had a good idea for my next blog post, but I forgot what it was.
Let’s see… It came to me while looking over my Casino Royale post, and I remember contemplating about writing more “writerly” posts like that. Something about…not dialogue, but something else.
Editing! I wanted to talk about editing! But what, exactly, about editing?
Gee, if only I could remember…
Keeping Track of Your Ideas
Okay, I finally remember what it is I wanted to write about this time: the process of coming up with ideas and keeping track of them–not only during the planning stages of a novel but also during the writing and editing stages.
Yup, that was it.
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As you can see, it’s important to have a system for keeping track of all your ideas or else you end up looking like a scatterbrain–like me, heh. However, even with a situation like this, just writing out/journaling your thoughts in a free fashion can help you retrace your steps. I probably do this more often than I even realize!
If you’re anything like me, then keeping track of the multitude of ideas that come to you can be a real challenge. There are several methods I actually use to keep track of my thoughts as they come to me, and I’ve probably talked about most of them before. Making a list of them here, though, might prove to be just as useful to others as it is to me!
I’ve mentioned this before on this blog, but sometimes ideas actually come to me in the form of dialogue. What better way, then, to capture your ideas than on a voice recorder? Heck, you could even record a video, if you want!
Sometimes ideas that come to me are based off certain emotions or moods, or perhaps a turn of phrase. It can be hard to capture those kind of ideas clearly when you first try to write them down, especially when it comes to you as something that should be verbalized. Acting it out, then, or “reporting it live” can be a more effective way to catch this fleeting idea or inspiration as it happens if you don’t happen to have anything to scribble it onto. I’ll be driving across the city and bam! some lines of dialogue will magically come to me. Having a portable voice recorder handy is a good thing, in such a case.
More often, ideas will come to me visually and I want to write them down because I’m afraid if I don’t do it immediately then I’ll forget. A lot of times this happens when I’m already in the middle of writing something. That’s when having some scratch pieces of paper comes in handy.
At my house we go through a lot of print-outs that just didn’t print right or had errors on them, and normally we’d just recycle these pages. Eventually my mom decided to start snipping up such pages into fours and using them as scratch paper.
Pretty useful, actually.
I keep a stack in one of my desk organizers, so if something comes to me out of the blue and is simple enough for me to scribble down quickly–in this scene, Voi could have this insight, etc.–then either clip it to the chapter I’m currently working on (editing) in my manuscript or keep it in a pile with other “notes to clip.” There are times when I’m working on one scene and an idea or insight will come to me for an earlier or later one; I can go back and clip those to their respective chapters later.
Sometimes you just don’t have time for neat-and-tidy data entry methods! This one works well on the fly.
Same idea here, only you use sticky notes. Sometimes which one I grab just depends on what’s closest. Sticky notes are nice if you want to post an idea directly under the line you want to enter it at in your manuscript.
If you have the long, narrow sticky notes those are pretty good for making chapter tabs for your manuscript. I’m sure there are plenty of other uses, but those are my big ones.
Leave A Comment
Okay, so this one works better if you’re actually writing your story and an idea comes to you then.
I don’t know what other word processors people use, but I assume most folks (with PCs anyway) use Microsoft Word. If that’s the case, then you’ll know (or maybe you don’t) that you can insert comments into your documents as you’re working on them. Maybe you have an idea but aren’t sure whether you want to implement it into your text yet. Leaving a quick comment lets you jot down that idea off in the margins and allows you to think about it for a while until you’re ready to come back and make a definitive decision on the matter. This works almost exactly like using scrap pieces of paper or sticky notes except it’s a lot easier to keep track of!
What’s also nice about using comments is not just the freedom to continue your writing after jotting down a quick thought but the fact that, once your first draft is complete, you can actually print out those comments as a separate document. Word keeps track of the comments for you by assigning them numbers in the sequence that they occur within the manuscript. It also tells you what page each comment was made on.
So long as you don’t change your formatting after printing out your comments, they should both line up–which makes going through your manuscript later with that encouraging red pen and highlighter (or whatever you choose to use) so much easier when you start actually making changes to it!
Journal It – Electronically
Sometimes I just have to write my way through a problem, and sometimes my ideas turn out to be a thousand-word ramble (or more); that’s when keeping a journal comes in handy. I’m sure I’ve talked about this before here on the blog, but that’s all right.
When I’m already at the computer, then it’s kind of nice to just write down my ideas in another document. I created one called “Element 7 Journal I” and have just been dumping a lot of my extraneous thoughts there. (I actually have more than one; I don’t like to put more than 50 pages in one document, for some reason, unless it’s my manuscript.) I also label the beginning of the document this way, or similarly, and insert one of those line breaks then start my entries from there.
For each entry I type in the date and also create a title for whatever I plan on exploring. For example, if I want to think about a certain character’s motivations, then I’ll give the entry the name “Voi’s motivations.” If I want to look at more than one thing, then I just string in a few titles using semi-colons–like “Voi’s Motivations; Elemental Deities.”
What’s nice about keeping an electronic journal is that it allows you to do quick searches by key words. Very helpful, if you have hundreds of pages of thoughts! (And I have several hundred thus far, though I’ve admittedly been using journals less now that I’m in the editing stage rather than planning or writing stages.) If you make your journal entry titles in bold and in a larger font, then this makes spotting certain ideas easier, as well, and you can just quickly scroll through and look for stuff that way.
Whatever makes life easiest for you.
Journal It – TOFW (The Old-Fashioned Way)
You can also keep a journal by writing it out in longhand, and there are times when this is preferable.
Sometimes I want to make diagrams, or sketch things, or draw something else that would be impossible to do in Word. (Mind maps, anyone?) And now I’m 100% sure I talked about this before here.
I do the same thing here, with including the date of entry, though I didn’t always give a title. It’s a lot more difficult to retrace your ideas on paper than it is electronically, imo, but this does have its uses (as I mentioned above.)
In any case, it’s really just a matter of preference. I like to keep both electronic and longhand journals because it just depends on where I’m at, what’s closest to me and what, exactly, I’m trying to explore.
Okay, this is something that has been useful during the planning stage.
As you can see, I’ve got several binders, each for different purposes. That big three-inch one holds not only my TOFW journals but all of my created languages. (Yeah, I’ve created a few languages.) The slender white one contains any especially important hand-written (or even typed) notes about my world–characters, world organizations, settings, history, and even a song that I wrote. There are also some clippings from magazines, sketches and other doodles ‘n’ things I did that I keep in this binder.
The green one is actually some reasearch I did on how to write stories. It mostly contains the clinics I purchased off Holly Lisle’s HollyShop site and were really helpful in getting me started. The last (blue) binder contains any interesting articles I’ve come across that were related to my story and thought were useful. I like to print some of them out then highlight particularly helpful sections and add notes.
Kind of like doing homework! (Only it’s way more fun because I’m doing it for…well, fun. Heh.)
I guess binding is filing, in a way, but this time I mean electronically.
Yeah…there’s lots of ways to keep files, folks, and lots of things to keep on file when you’re creating your own world.
I once mentioned that I like collecting images like there’s no tomorrow, so I tend to keep those on my computer. I have an “Element 7” file specifically for this purpose, which I’ve subdivided into “Story Stuff,” for specific elements present in my story, and “Other,” which is a more general collection of things that informs what I decide to place in my story. Under the former are “Places” and “Characters” and under the latter includes everything from “Fashion” and “Weapons & Technology” to “Altitudes,” in which I can observe what the world looks like to a pilot from specific altitudes.
Yeah…I even went so far as creating a “wardrobe” and set of personal items for my main characters. Looked up some 1920s and 30s fashions (very few early 40s pieces) and voilà!
Photos can take up a fair amount of space on your hard drive (nearly six gigs, in my case, including stuff for school and whatnot), so having an external drive could come in handy if your don’t have much space or for some reason are in a crunch to begin with, heh (like I was before I got my new laptop).
When all is said and done, I can always tell you what hand-picked outfit she is wearing in every scene within my story–not necessarily one I saved in my file but something similar or reimagined. In any case, I truly treat her as my “leading lady.” 😛
Usually, I would just store my scenes in a folder as separate Word files, and I still do this, but sometimes it’s nice to have a way to actually organize all those files in the order you’d like to see them in, by chapter, and to be able to move stuff around easily. yWriter lets me do this. What’s more, it’s 100% free! All thanks to Spacejock.
There are several features on yWriter, some I haven’t used for my own reasons, including storing scene descriptions, keeping a list of characters who are in each scene, inserting pictures, keeping track of each scene’s location…and lots of other cool features like a storyboard. (It also lets me use italics now! The older version I once had didn’t do this.) For something that’s free, it’s pretty darn cool. And useful. It doesn’t strike that crazy desire in me to get lost in a million features and unnecessarily lose hours to discovering all it can do; it keeps things simple while making my writing life easier, and that’s what I love about it.
I’ve also heard of Scrivener, which lets you do a lot more things, from the sound of it. However, it’s not free, and it’s currently only available for Mac users. From what I’ve heard, though, people generally seem to like it.
Maybe you’ll give it a go!
And for anyone who’s ever wondered WTH I’ve actually been working on…
I realize I just doubled my typical post length here, but I really didn’t feel like splitting this up into two. Just didn’t make sense, in this case.
What methods do you use?
I imagine I’m not the only one who uses these methods, but I wonder what others there are out there! I’ve heard of using cork boards to post scene cards and whatnot on, among other things. What else do you do to keep track of all your stuff?